the early morning darkness
leads to sunshine on my face
an unexpected walk through the crisp air
leads to life within me
smiles and laughter at the top
coffee and conversation at the bottom
Senior Sunrise
it’s symbolic or something
an attempt at poetry
coffee & contemplation 
I really liked your poem! Although I wasn’t there, I could understand what the sunrise was like. You used some really good descriptions. Good job!
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Ok, this is so cute. I love your notes of the little details. Your closer is also a lovely understatement.
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I love how simplistic this poem is on the surface but that it also has a deeper meaning. This captures the overall atmosphere of the sunrise really well too 🙂
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Aww! I love your colloquial tone to capture your mastery of archetypes. And what cute pictures!
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